L.o In English we had to write a story about these things: Candle,Broken window, Ocean,Loaf of bread and a Dog and here is the story
It was a hot sunny morning and my family had
planned a picnic. Once we all woke up it was 12:30
and i was starving my mum had already packed all the food.
After about 1 hour and 6 minutes later we arrived at a beach
at a beach called Belleayre the beach had a lot of people there
but we managed to find a space after like a hour walk (well it felt like it)
it was getting dark so mum lit the candlesticks don’t ask why she brung them
and i started to play fetch with my dog while my family were eating. I threw
the ball and my dog rosie chased after it really fast and to no surprise
she never have it back we were in a dodgy neighbourhood now and i was lost.
I finally found rosie and i took the ball i threw it really hard
for rosie to get i was mad i wasn’t thinking and it hit a window it mustn't
have been a strong window because i smashed the window.
I ran and ran for what felt like hours rosie was chasing after me she was fast.
I obviously wasn’t thinking because i thought i was lost and i wasn’t paying
attention because if i listened carefully i could hear the faint sound of the waves.
I followed the sound and eventually found the beach.
My next challenge was finding my family amongst the crowd.
Eventually i found them,the expression on their face
when i came back the first thing they said was “where the hell were you”
i decided i wasn’t going to answer and just started snacking out.
I grabbed a piece of bread from the loaf of bread and got out some
Butter and some ham to put in my sandwich and i also grabbed an apple
and started snacking out.
Later on we had a run in the water i fell because
i’m clumsy and the sea water was disgusting.
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