Birds @ Lochmara Lodge

When we went to camp we saw these birds and in writing we are focusing on vocabulary and punctuation and this is what I wrote.

when we arrive to Lochmara lodge we met Lockie the dog and we started walking up the stairs towards the birds. The birds we saw are called Kakariki (red crowned bird) since there was a large group of us we had to split up into to groups  so there weren’t heaps of us going in at a time. Our group were first and we loved going in the cage to see the birds and the leader got to feed them the birds were very loud and there tweets sounded like they were singing  but the only downside was going out of the cage to let the other group in as we were waiting for the other group we tried some leaves they were gross! They tasted like pepper and the other group finally came out.