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Wednesday, 30 May 2018

Tomorrow when the war began - Chapter 3


Tomorrow, When The War Began:
Chapter Three


Must Do Questions:
Why does Robyn think they are the only people ever to have gone into Hell?
because they think maybe only them and hermit have seen it
Why do you think the valley is called Hell? It was called hell
because hermit lived there and it was like a prison it was really hard to get in and out.
Why must the teenagers seem like visitors from hell to the wild things living in the clearing? How is this ironic?
because hermit lived there and they thought they were the only other people to visit
What picture of Kevin do we get in this chapter?
he's really nice,not judgemental
What does Ellie liken Fi to? Do you think this is a fair assessment of her character. Use examples from the text
to support your thinking
exotic butterfly because it said "i'd never met anyone who hadn't had two minute noodles before".
At times Ellie switches her narration from retelling the story to commenting about her life in the present
Comparing things to what has happened in the past and to make it more interesting and so you get to know
Ellie a bit more
- why do you think the author has chosen to write in this style?
to make it more interesting

Tomorrow when the war began - chapter 2


Tomorrow, When The War
Began: Chapter Two


Must Do Questions:
How did the group of teenagers ascend Tailors Stitch?
in a land rover
What are the two special events happening the day after
cocktail shaker ride,commemoration day = wirrawee show
the teenagers leave for the bush?
How many days were they planning on staying? How much food
do you think is reasonable to bring, split between 7 teenagers?
5 days and Easy food that can be carried in bags when going into
the bush and that is not to heavy like potato flakes
Who is the Hermit and what is he supposed to have done?
old ex murderer
and killed his wife and baby
Do you think the Hermit will be significant to this story? Why/Why not?
no because he's an ex murderer
Is their decent down Satan’s Steps into Hell dangerous?
Discuss what are the dangers, how could they have made it safer,
what would you have done?
the ground was hard and dry and they couldn't find water
Predict what the bridge signifies
They must think Hermit Made
the bridge because it was beautifully made which must've meant he had
been there for a long time.

Tuesday, 29 May 2018

Tomorrow when the war began - Chapter 1


Tomorrow, When The War
Began- Chapter One


Must Do Questions:


  1. What are the advantages and disadvantages of first person narration?
    She’s talking about she got told to write evrything down and good thing about that is you may know exactly what's happening once read it and downside is that it may get boring writing everything
  2. Why do you think Ellie needs to tell the story in chronological order?
    so we know what order everything was in and we know what happened
when it happened
Pick one interesting word from the chapter, find its meaning, and explain why chronological- following the order in which they occured and i found this interesting
because it's just an interesting word displayed in the book.
it is interesting.
John Marsden foreshadows several events and characters in this chapter. something out of the open may happen,something may get rough,Going to be troubled
times
Make three predictions based on the evidence in the text about what may occur later in
the story.
What kind of story do you think Ellie is going to tell? Uses evidence from the text to support
your answers.
about what's been happening like it is said that "i rang fiona after the call from Corrie"
What set of skills do these characters have that convince their parents that they
can ‘go bush’
independently. Find examples for three characters.Homer-wild,outrageous didnt care what anyone did or what anyone thought of him,Fi-light and graceful,kevin-wide wide mouth

Monday, 28 May 2018

Tomorrow when the war began examining the cover.


Tomorrow, When The War Began-
Examining the Cover


Must Do Questions:


Looking at the original cover to the right, answer the following questions,
remember to explain why you think that for each answer:


  • How do you think this story will be written?
I think it’ll be written like a novel about when people like enter war or something
  • Why do you think the story is entitled as it is?
Because people are put into war the day it starts
  • Where do you think the story will take place?
In a forest/somewhere hot
  • What time period do you think the story is set in?
1890-1960
Consider the effect of the following choices-
   -How is the cover composed? (camera angle/shot type/framing) Mid shot
  • How is lighting used? (brightness/mood/contrast) there's like a sun shining and the lighting is good
  • How is text used? (font/size/language/positioning)The font time is large
  • What symbolism is used? (objects/people/setting/colours)
it’s dark which make the people look the the figures they are and it’s like sunset.

Tomorrow when the war began before we read.


Tomorrow, When The War
Began- Before we Read


Open Key Facts Doc. We will work on this throughout this topic.
Copy- make a copy
Rename- attach your name
Organise- put it into your English folder
Work- Complete the first table.


Must Do Questions:


One advertisement for ‘Tomorrow, When The War Began’ states:
‘Hell isn’t only a place for the damned, sometimes it’s a place where
the saved take refuse… Seven teenagers take a trip to Hell. And seven
come back. To Hell’


  1. What do you think this statement means?
The war is like hell the 7 teenagers go into the war and all of them make their way out  
  1. What could ‘Hell’ mean in this context?
All the fighting/war and deaths
  1. Why do you think the story is entitled ‘Tomorrow, When the War Began’
Because these 7 teenagers go somewhere which is war and thats why it’s called tomorrow when the war began
  1. What does that make you think the book will be about?
People going into war
  1. What do you think the characters will be like?
Courageous,

Tuesday, 22 May 2018

Passion Project

                       Dogs

What i know about them:
There are alot of different breeds
Dogs can hear and smell way better than humans
They’re cute


Research about them:
Smart as a 2 year old toddler
Dogs and cats both slurp water the same way
Your dog has a sense of time and misses you when your gone
Your dog's whiskers help them “see:” in the dark
Dogs only have sweat glands in their paws
On average a dog’s mouth exerts 320 pounds of pressure
Your one year old pup is as physically mature as a 15 year old human
Your dog’s sense of smell is 1,000 to 10 million times better than yours
Dog’s can hear four times as far as humans
Your dog can sense your feelings
Dogs can learn more than 1000 words
Big happy “helicopter” is a sign of a really nice dog
There are 400 million different breeds of dog’s around the world
The average dog lives 10-14 years
In general smaller breeds live longer than larger breeds
Just like human fingerprints no dogs nose prints are alike
Puppies have 28 teeth and adult dogs have 42
Dogs aren't colorblind but their eyes don't have receptors for red. They see in shades of black and white and also in shades of blue and yellow.

I have learnt that dogs aren't really color blind


Tuesday, 15 May 2018

Introduction:

 2 ways to start off an introduction.

  • A Rhetorical Question                
  • A Quote
How you doing

T:  Title of the Book

A:  Author  of the Book/ Director of Film

K: Keywords from questions

O: Outline of your ideas


Question:
  1. Describe one important moment in the text. Explain how that moment
changed at least one important relationship or character, supporting your points with visual and / or oral language features.

  • Brainstorm-
  • When Geel Piet Dies- He taught PK to fight- changes how PK views boxing

  • When PK sees Maria at the Boxing- Sexual tension between Pk and Maria,
  •                                                        - Maria is willing to do things she shouldn’t
  •                                                          to be with PK

  • When PK teaches the Natives English
- Shows that PK has respect for the Native Africans,
- PK cares for people regardless of their race.

  • When PK’s chicken is hung and killed.
- Pk loses his symbol of courage, family, guardian and his only friend in the school
- PK doesn’t seek revenge against all Africanas- later dates Maria
- PK becomes braver and stronger, stands up to others, stands his ground.

Example Introduction
Have you ever experienced an event that changed your life? In (A) John Avildsen’s (T) ‘The Power of One’, (K) a moment that changes the main character PK’s life is when his beloved pet chicken ‘Mother Courage’ was strung up and killed by his schoolmates. (O) This is shown by the way PK loses not only his chicken, but his symbol of courage and friendship, his ability to not hold the actions of one against a whole race and how he learns to stand up to people who are bigger than him.            
Paragraph-
Statement
Example
Explain
Link
Statement
Example
Xplain
Xplain purpose (why did the director do it)
Xplain the effect (how do we feel watching it)
Your link- link to the statement, link to next paragraph, link to somewhere else in the film.
Pk loses his symbol of courage, family, guardian and his only friend in the school

[S]When Pk’s chicken ‘Mother Courage’ is killed, PK loses his symbol of courage, his only remaining family and his only friend at school. [E] In this scene, Borta the school bully tries to blame the English for the killing of Africanas families in concentration camps in South Africa. He claims that Hitler will punish the English for their actions, and that he will punish the English too, starting with PK by killing his chicken. He has the chicken strung up on a rope by its legs and kills it by firing a stone at its chest using a slingshot. {X} The chicken, ‘Mother Courage’ was given to PK by the witch doctor as a guide to help him find his courage and overcome his bed wetting. Therefore, when the chicken is killed, PK’s symbol of courage is killed with it and PK will now have to be courageous on his own. PK had also lost his father and mother, so the chicken was the only family he had left when he went back to boarding school. In this way we see the character of PK change as he learns to live without family and friends, and find his own source of courage. This links to later in the film when his boxing coach Geel Piet is killed by a guard and PK once again loses his friends and family.

{L}- In this way we see that PK has lost his symbol of courage, is only family and his friend.
(L)-In this way we see the character of PK change as he has to learn to live without family and friends, and find his own source of courage.
{L}- In this way we see the character of PK change as he learns to live without family and friends, and find his own source of courage. This links to later in the film when his boxing coach Geel Piet is killed by a guard and PK once again loses his friends and family.

Another way the character of PK is developed as a result of the death of his chicken is that he is able to forgive and not hold grudges against a whole race of people for the actions of a few. At this point in the film, we see that the Africana boys hold a grudge against all English because of the actions of some in the past. When they killed his chicken, PK could follow their example and hate all Africanas because of Borta and his friends, but he chooses to embrace people of different cultures and only blame the person for their actions not the race. The director includes this scene to let the audience know that PK as an English man will face difficulties from the Africanas throughout his life.This links to later in the film when PK wants to date Maria, but her father will not allow it because PK is English and Maria is an Africana. PK choses to date her anyway, because he looks beyond a person's race.  

Conclusion- MIRROR- reflect the points of your essay.
The event that changed PK’s life was when his chicken ‘Mother Courage’ was killed by Borta and the Africana boys at his school. As a result of this incident PK had to learn to find his courage from within, to make new family and friends, to treat all peoples with respect regardless of their race, and to stand up for the things he believes in. In this way, we can see the importance of this scene in the overall film.


What am i learning:I am learning to write an essay 
What i'm wondering:will it be as easy on the essay in the class as on my own


























Stone age tools intro

1). What problems did people face in the stone age?
lived in a area with dangerous animals,didnt have anything strong enough to protect themselfs from animals

2). What food did they eat?
Roots,fruits,raw flesh

3). What were used to hunt food? 
stones,spears

Image result for stone age cavemen using tools4). What was difficult about using stones?
hard to hold,heavy,hard to throw at long distance

5).What did they do about this problem?
shape the stone

6). What kind of tools were used?
stones,spears

7). What type of tools could they make when adding wood and stones together?
spear,axe,pickaxe,arrow,knife

8). What is an axe and pick axe used for?
axe is used for chopping trees and wood pickaxe is used for breaking hard things